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This is mainly for grammar checking, proofreading, adding citations and improving the flow. If you make it shorter , it will be the best. Unfortunately, the data mentioned in the work cannot be removed. I have attached my draft below. This is a section of a large project.
Background: A group of New York investors with business, fashion and design backgrounds have come together to launch a new venture. The company plans to design and sell sneakers and casual footwear to the creative class. They see their shoes as a key element of the “uniform of the creative class.” They expect to compete with companies and brands like Converse Jack Purcell, TOMS, SeaVees, Generic Surplus, and Blackspot. They have studied and been inspired by the business model of eyeglass company Warby Parker. The venture has secured enough funding to grow and sustain its business.
You’ve been hired as a site-selection consultant to help develop their locational strategy.