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I’m not sure where we are having the miscommunication, but again, this is not an outline.
An outline looks like:
As for feedback on what you have here:
*Need an attention getter
*Missing audience adaptation statement
*clear claim & preview
*oral footnotes need 2 of the 3 parts of author, publication & date. You seem to be only using 1 part
*Good that you now have a counterclaim but it needs to be discussed a bit more than 1 sentence. Good rebuttal.
*Need 2 sources per main point – your 3rd point (solution) has no research cited
*You only have 3 sources in the Work Cited, assignment calls for 6 sources, 1 coming from a research database.
I’ve attached the documents you would have seen in the Week 12, 13 & 14 folders. They include the Speech requirements, outline template & sample outline