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Introduction The introduction should begin with a vivid description of your chose space. Rather than “tell” the reader about the space, “show” it through good sensory detail (what you see, hear, feel/textures, smell, emotions/sensations). Conclude with a thesis statement. Your thesis should answer the question: In what way is this space a cultural space, and how does it shape those who use it? Body Paragraph #1: • Begin with a strong topic sentence that explains one major point/detail about your space. • Add multiple sentences that provide specific details about the space that help you fully explain your major point. • Use examples from your observation notes. • Feel free to draw connections to other cultural elements/events. Body Paragraph #2 – 4: same as Body Paragraph #1. • Begin with a strong topic sentence that explains one major point/detail about your space. • Add multiple sentences that provide specific details about the space that help you fully explain your major point. Use examples from your observation notes. • Use examples from your observation notes. • Feel free to draw connections to other cultural elements/events. Conclusion: For the final paragraph of your essay, you should discuss the overall deeper meaning and new insights you got from your observation and analysis. • Your deeper meaning should be something that is not obvious or even visible, something that many people may not notice or see about the space. • Explain why you think most people would not notice these things. • End by suggesting how your reader should think about your space from now on. Visual Representation: Include at least one visual representation of your chosen space. This could include: • A photograph • A sketch of the layout • Other image/visual
Muscle Factory Gym The space is very organized, with most of the shoulder equipment in 1 area, and all the leg, chest, back, and dumbbell equipment in the same area. Everyone is either 6 feet apart, or they are spotting each other, making sure the eccentric motion of the weight is fluid and controlled. Most people keep their attention to themselves, trying to get through their workout as effortlessly as possible or training to failure on every set to the completion of every rep until it turns into an all-out grit war of incomplete repetitions. However, there are still outliers of people who look around, watching what the other people are doing or viewing the mannerisms that one portrays in an outgoing setting as I am right now watching all these people complete either their chore/goal of going to the gym. However, some people enjoy the gym and treat it as their haven or home away from home, as I do. The weights have a vintage and old feel to them with their rusty and chipped look as if they have seen better days and the bright orange paint splattered on the walls give off a ray of energy with its bright luminance. There seem to be more fans added to the gym every time I go to cope with the number of people joining. The smell of the gym smells like a sweaty downfall of BO very in need of a few yankee candles around the gym. Record sensory data of the space, including sights, sounds, smells, and textures
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